October Girl

**Nice Storybook Lily!!! *gives a cookie and high five*** NAME: Lavain Carter GENDER: Female AGE: 18 RACE: Heliopean--farie APPEARANCE: Black hair, crazy unhuman bright blue eyes, pale skin, tall, has

WELL Hello! Welcome to YWS!!! I'm Max, if you need anything just PM me, hope you enjoy the site!!! -Max

Rogue (Robyn) "Adeline, it will be alright ok?" I said looking at her with sadness in my eyes. "What did you get a vision about that too?" She snorted. I ...

Jessica "Oh, the eye thing is NOT working this time buster." my eyes then turned blue. He chuckled, "Yeah, riiiight that's why yours are turning blue too right?" I glared, ...

***yes I think Rusty is dead**** Rogue (Robyn) I looked down, I knew Dent was right. But we still had to watch over each other. "It couldn't be THAT bad." ...

Ooooh the title drew me in!!! And the story didn't disapoint!!! :] I like it..... what are you reading my crit for? Get to work wirting the next one!!!! -Max

Marc Luna "Congratulations, on your wedding, sorry we couldn't be there." The general smiled. "So how've the boys been holding up?" I asked refurring to the guys down at the ...

Jessica I stopped, "So you did lie to me?" I asked.

Rogue (Robyn) For a moment I stared at Chase and Adeline. I sent a strong message through their minds. "Just.... don't tell anyone.... ok? Just between us three. Ok?" I ...

Marc Luna "I really want you to meet him, hes the most kindest, gentlest, and cheapest guy I know." I joked.'

Rogue (Robyn) "You could have died! What's wrong with you two?" I asked coughing. "I was meant to die in there." I said. "Those fumes really must have goten to ...

***sorry guys I was..... away.**** "What, no I won't get killed! I'm not that stupid. They won't kill me once they find out your injered and need help. Be right ...

hmm, nice. Affraid that all I can really say :lol: -Max

hmm, I like it, Nice SCL. Something new and fresh finally :D your friend, as always -Max

***uh so.... stubborn =P*** Jessica "STOP!" I blinked and landed on my ass, infront of the scientests and Chris. "Grab her!" He yelled. There was blood all over the place, ...